Magnificently Brilliant Headline – What do you think?

Sep 2nd, 2009 | By Barbara | Category: Make Things Simple

Income FitnessI just finished updating my headline over at Income Fitness.   What do you think?  Is there a Oscar in my future?  :)

One of the things I realized I had not emphasized was how much time Income Fitness saves people who want to learn quickly – I’ve been making a living now for 12+ YEARS online and this product is the result of all those hard-earned years of research, tweaking, finding what works and what doesn’t etc.

Click HERE to check it out!

The Headline Analyzer gave it a 33.3% rating (professional copywriting is between 30-40%).

And if you’d like resources for headlines, check out some threads at our community:

Lots of great info there!!

Enjoy,

Barbara

ps – I was inspired to overhaul it after I read:

Make an ebook

Building Your Own eBook Empire

(I’m learning great stuff for that book – definitely check it out!!)

 

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2 Comments

  1. Ravi@How to make quick moneyNo Gravatar (5 comments.) on 10.09.2009 at 20:44 (Reply)

    Well this sounds like a nice book and worth spending money and since you are giving reference of it to your readers than I think I can trust the book. Thanks for introducing it.
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    1. BarbaraNo Gravatar on 11.09.2009 at 06:13 (Reply)

      Tiff’s book is beyond awesome – I’ve learned a heck of a lot from it myself. :)

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